原创啊，了不起。有匠心。

很白话，很自然，很真切，很意蕴。

国人用“白话”创作不大多见。这边的乡村顶级歌手Brad Paisley唱过很多白话而有意蕴的歌，比如 Brad Paisley - I Wish You'd Stay：



Brad Paisley

I Wish You'd Stay lyrics

Songwriters: Dubois, Chris; Paisley, Brad

I talked to my sister in Memphis
And I told her you were movin' to town
Here's her number
She said she'd be glad to show you around
I left a map on your front seat
Just in case you lose your way
But don't worry, once you reach Sallisaw
It's all interstate


I know you need to go
But before you do I want you to know,
that I Wish you the best
And I wish you nothing less
Than every thing you've ever dreamed of
And I hope that you find love along the way
But most of all
I wish you'd stay

I figure right about sundown
You'll be in West Tennessee
And by then
Maybe I'll understand why you had to leave

I know that you've done some changin'
And I know there's no changin' your mind
And yes I know
We've been through this a thousand times

I'm sorry for still holdin' on
I'll try to let go and I'll try to be strong, and I'll

Wish you the best
And I wish you nothing less
Than every thing you've ever dreamed of
And I hope that you find love along the way
But most of all
I wish you'd stay

Yeah, everything you've ever dreamed of
And I hope that you'll find love along the way
But most of all
I wish you'd stay
I wish you'd stay

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歌词几乎就是日常生活中的话语。白话之极，一样匠心独运。



Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 2009-07-12, 02:49PM by 立委.